The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/11
Oh, this is great. Is this based on a true story? If not, I'm impressed with your creativity, and it certainly read like a true story.

You (or the MC of the story)were/was Jennifer, right? I got a bit confused, since this was in first person, and then all of a sudden the MC mentions her name.

Again, awesome job. I could see where this was going at times, but that didn't at all spoil the story. :)
This is funny and had me chuckling throughout. I have a feeling this is a true story, fiction isn't that funny. Be careful if it is true using your real name . Although the names you used are common it still may give a peek into your identity. If the names are made up then ignore this but I think I guessed the author because of the name. However since I'm not a judge maybe it doesn't matter. I'm only rambling on like this because I too am the baby of the family and we adorable youngest can get away with rambling. Did I say I laughed out loud several times?
08/26/11
Hahahahahaha! I Loved this! Very well written, and I felt as if I was sitting watching the whole scenario unfold before my very eyes!

Great! We all have a story of "sworn secrecy" somewhere in our closets of life! God Bless~
08/27/11
I enjoyed your turkey tale. You did a nice job grossing me out. Well done.
08/29/11
Infamous might fit your story a little better. How did you explain the crunch coating? Well done. You've managed to capture an entire day's events in 750 words or less. Well done.
08/31/11
LOL, great story! Loved how the turkey took on a personality all its own. Good job.
Congratulations! I really liked this piece and am delighted to see it have that awesome first place ribbon! You are progressing at an incredible pace; I can't wait to see you in level two!
09/01/11
Congratulations Jennifer! Nice job.
09/01/11
I thoroughly enjoyed your story! It was funny, engaging, and actually personified the turkey quite well. Congratulations!
09/02/11
Congratulations on a highly deserved first place win! I loved this story, it offered the readers so much...humor, family memories, and love. God Bless~
Congratulations not only on first place in your level but in ranking 12th overall! That is outstanding, you'll be getting an EC in no time!
09/27/11
I really enjoyed this one. It has the dry sarcastic tone to the descriptions and events that make the story more humorous.

Nice work.