The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/11
Very good and useful devotion. You've offered excellent advice strongly supported by Scripture. Where's tomorrow's?
08/26/11
This was an inspiring story, and well done. I was touched by it and the beautiful message you told. God Bless~
I really enjoyed this. I chuckled at the kid's reactions.

Make sure you use quotation marks around a character's dialog and start a new paragraph each time a different speaker talks. Even if it's one word like "What?" it should have a new paragraph.

The message and scripture verse are perfect. You managed to take a serious subject like cancer and keep it on topic. Nicely done.
08/30/11
Well done. Great devotion. I look forward to seeing more. Keep writing! God Bless.
This is such a good lesson. I liked the curiosity and honesty shown in the conversation between the little one and the narrator. I especially liked your sentence. 'Remember, storms talk, but so does God - listen to both. Where one gives information, the other gives inspiration.'
Well done! What a wonderful message and devotional. You have to send this in somewhere after you brush it up just a tad. Thank you for your honestly and humility. Praise God.