The Official Writing Challenge
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You grabbed my attention from the first line. And held it to the very end. I wasn't sure if-it was going to be on topic but think you covered it with the MC being honest with himself and his wife, as well as having to report to the government. You had one one little typo filling instead of filing. Overall you wrote an exciting story.
'Risk Assessment' has vivid imagery and descriptions. You are an exciting writer. I'm looking forward to more stories.