The Official Writing Challenge
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Adults don't always make the best role models.
You illustrate this well in your story.
Being earnest towards God is certainly a good rule to follow and tries wel into the given theme.
This is a nice message. Everyone can relate to the stories. I used to get mad at my husband when he would tell my kids,"Do what I say not what I do." Kids learn by watching.
You have captured an ageless parent's dilemma: 'Teach a child in the way they should go.' Your writing shows promise. More!
08/15/11
Great parenting! And a wonderful devotional/story, Well done.
08/15/11
Kind of a reverse lesson. But excellent way to show the folly of a bad temper and the importance of being a living example of Christ~
Good story and a wise mother.
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