The Official Writing Challenge
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Well done, A great message in this poem.
Too true, I'm afraid.
A friend told me recently, that they have a prayer meeting for 'just a few' who will not repeat the prayer requests received, not gossip about the situations into which they pray.
Isn't it sad that we have come to this - where most of the church members cannot be trusted to come before God in earnest supplication and intercession?
I love poems that make me think and this did just that. I did notice one typo- Lords name should be Lord's name. Other than that minor thing I think you did a nice job.
This poem has a beat to it and is measured well. Your message is so compelling. Keep writing!