The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow this is intense! I really enjoyed it from the first line.

Remember to start a new paragraph each time a different person says something even if it's just one word.

I liked how you didn't try to tie the ending into a neat little bow. Good job.
A captivating read all the way through. On a minor note:the Gideons are not a "society" (I'm a Gideon). Either The Gideons or The Gideons International is an acceptable way of mentioning them. Well done.
Congratulations on ranking 8th in level one!