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Although English, I do appreciate the message of your story.
It calls to mind the old song, 'If we forget God, Satan will rule - and sin will cover the land and the sea.' Finally, if we forget God, our nation is doomed.

A strong and very effective reminder to the nation/s.
You make some great points many people don't realize that the laws God gave the Jens were things that may seem like commonplace. One of the reasons pork was forbidden was because they didn't have the ability to cook it properly and could die from it I liked how you showed an example everyone could relate to to make your points.