The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written. You made the point very clearly.
I'm not much on poetry, but The Perfect World was very easy to read and understand. I enjoyed it. Should there be "single . . . in need of a job" instead of "need of a job"?
Meaningful words..."Because He looks not there. He looks inside."
Very lovely. You had nice flow and a great message!
A very good reminder! Nicely done.