The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/11
Very intriguing! It was nice to read something written in a completely different time. Your words and story line were compelling and held my attention.

I was a little confused at the end, however. It didn't feel like an ending, but as if it just stopped mid-story.

Nice writing, though.

07/31/11
very unusual and original, captivating and intiguing. Is this historical fiction or base on fact? would love to know.
08/02/11
Great writing. Your ending sounds like the perfect intro to a book about her life. Could be?????
Congratulations on ranking 10th in level one!
08/06/11
well done on a 10th placing with this and thanks for the PM enlightening me on the background.... maybe add it here now for the benefit of other curious readers now we have all the peices named?