The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/11
Nice story. Cute, sweet and nicely told.

Great writing. :)
07/31/11
lovely lovely story!!! had you meant to use the parallel of the planks and the speck of dust in your neighbours eye? either way delightful tale delightfully told. i was right there and look forward for more tales form this lovely family
08/04/11
yes!! and so you should have been highly commended for this :-) hope this will bring more people to read this
08/06/11
Great story on family life and learning