The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/11
an interesting account of how meeting God and knowing his love can turn lives around but it somehow reads like a summary on the back of a book. I would like to have a little more exploration of the person rather than just an account of her story. just a suggestion :-)
What a great story,Congratulations on ranking 15th in level one!
08/06/11
well done on making it onto the highest rankings board and being in the top half of the entries. Do keep writing as it is great to read your work. things are a little quiet here at the moment due to holidays but i am sure you will get more people reading and commenting as time goes on.