The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/11
This story was good! I wanted to keep reading and find out what happened to the farmer, even tho I guessed how it might end. :)
07/29/11
Wonderful story. I got excited when I began to realize how the debt was going to be paid. You did a great job of bringing me into the story.
07/30/11
A very interesting story which I thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks and keep them coming!
07/30/11
Imaginative parallel of redemption, though some descriptions of a crop or of livestock; or the kinds of homes may have enhanced the pictures even more clearly.
The ending was great.
08/01/11
clever story/ fable perfectly balance :-) beginning middle and end
Wow! Congratulations! Outstanding job.
08/04/11
well done now you can move to the next level!! congrats
08/04/11
Number ONE in Level ONE, and you deserve ONE big CONGRATULATIONS! Keep up the good work.
08/05/11
Loved the analogy. So well done. Congratulations!