The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/11
I like the way you use repetition of "God as my witness." It focuses on the narrative and ties it all together. I had a little difficulty following it, but I liked the ending.
07/30/11
There's a lot of turmoil in your MC's mind, but repeating your title keeps bringing it back together. I like your descriptions.