The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/05
Well-written, heartfelt story. Good job establishing the setting and mood of the draught. Excellent depiction of Timmy's perspective!
10/17/05
yes I agree. this is well writen, I could almost taste the dust blowing in the wind and feel the heat on my face. well done
10/19/05
When we are sincerely gratefull for all that God has given us, His blessings seem to multiply overnight. A thankful heart is fertile soil for the fruit of God's word. Thanks!
My word, we owe a lot to the American Walton's family!! A very good article by a very good writer. Well done and keep writing!!
Love from JOHN3-34 Evangelist
10/20/05
Great message in your story. I enjoyed this one very much.