The Official Writing Challenge
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Well-written, heartfelt story. Good job establishing the setting and mood of the draught. Excellent depiction of Timmy's perspective!
yes I agree. this is well writen, I could almost taste the dust blowing in the wind and feel the heat on my face. well done
When we are sincerely gratefull for all that God has given us, His blessings seem to multiply overnight. A thankful heart is fertile soil for the fruit of God's word. Thanks!
My word, we owe a lot to the American Walton's family!! A very good article by a very good writer. Well done and keep writing!!
Love from JOHN3-34 Evangelist
Great message in your story. I enjoyed this one very much.