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Wow, what a courageous testimony. Although many may not agree with you on all points you expressed your points with passion. I did feel some anger too but I believe you have every right to be angry. I hope many people will read your story.

If I may give you a tiny piece of advice Revise this and start with the paragraph I was a gay man. It grabs the reader and pulls them in immediately. Sometimes if you start out too theological, people skip over the story and never read the real root of your message.

Also consider changing the title to something like Formerly Gay Forever Joyful (that's kind of cheesy) but I think people need the title to match your main point. Someone who struggled like you needs to see in the title that you know what it feels like to be in their situation,

Again I really commend your courage and think you did a great job. Don't give up only you can tell your story.