The Official Writing Challenge
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I love this place you speak of in your poem - that secret place where we can meet with The Lord in private. I have found it to be a place of spiritual growth, love, inspiration, peace and hope.
You describe it very well, and it is the closeest place to Paradise this side of eternity.

A beautiful poem and a touching write.
Lovely description of a inviting relationship/place.
This is positively lovely. It flows so nicely.
07/24/11
Wonderful! I could just see this story in a devotional for children ... to teach them right from the beginning that they can stand strong when they run to their secret place with God. Wish I could be a publisher instantly. I'd take this on immediately. I have a burden for the children in this world! You are a poet - a blessed one. :-)
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