The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/11
Interesting viewpoint with the two sides of the coin. I like how you worked in the idea with the dialogue. Good job.
07/21/11
Great insight on the two sides of the coin! I love how you got your point across while keeping it light and interesting. Its wonderful how you really brought it all together, great job!
I liked the comparison, and I liked how you didn't turn a touchy subject into a sermon. That was a great way to open a door for God.
Good setting for a great conversation without a preach. Flowed well, pointed yet not cut and dried.
07/26/11
Great analogy using a coin. I never would have thought of that! The man turned around awful fast, though. That's the bad thing about resolving issues in a 750 word entry. Well-written. Nice job!
07/27/11
Creative parallel of the coin, and great dialogue between two good friends, though the end does seem a little rushed for me. But keep writing, for you have a real gift.