The Official Writing Challenge
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07/21/11
This is a beautiful story and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Nice job.
I so very much loved this story, it moved me to tears.
My uncle just passed away. Your article brought me more meaning than you can know. I liked the way you finished the story. You have a lot to offer.
07/22/11
I truely enjoied your story. It was very moving and nicely done. Two thumbs up!
Thank goodness Abby got the courage to ask that crucial question.
The story is touching and poignant and leaves an abiding testimony to the inspiration of the Holy Spirit and God's eternal grace.
I liked it very much and the title was excellent. Well written and very moving. Spot on for the topic.
A beautiful and moving piece!
You kept my attention from beginning to end with a tenderly written story. Well done.
Congratulations for ranking 9th in level one!
09/29/11
After reading this, I have tears in my eyes and goosebumps on my arms. Thank you so much for this story. In my opinion, it should have ranked higher than ninth.

Your story brings conviction with it. Why, oh why, am I so afraid to speak to the unsaved people I love about God? Will I be like Abby, only approaching them on their deathbeds - IF I even get that chance? You have inspired me to take courage. One of my favorite scriptures is Joshua 1:9. Now I need to live it. Thank you again.
09/30/11
This story is powerful, and I agree with Anne, very convicting. It makes me want to be bolder in sharing my faith with others, long before such dire moments arise. Well done.