The Official Writing Challenge
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07/15/11
Oh, I really like this. You captured feelings in this well.

Leave a line of space between each paragraph. It makes it easier on the eyes.

Excellent job with this entry!

07/21/11
Congratulations on a well-constructed story, and your 3rd place win. Great job!
07/21/11
Congrats on placing third! Keep it up!!