The Official Writing Challenge
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07/15/11
Okay. You definitely got me at the end. :)

There was one accronymn you didn't define, and even though you do define most of them later, I'd define them again at the bottom in an author's note. Also, I'd have chosen a different word then "draft" since woman aren't drafted.

Great job with this, once I figured out what was going on. :)