The Official Writing Challenge
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07/15/11
Some good reminders here!

You have a paragraph that repeats itself in the middle.

Good writing. We can never be reminded of our freedom in Christ too many times.
This is a great devotion with a wonderful message. My only suggestion might be to include a personal story about overcoming spiritual warfare. But the message and the Bible verses were perfect.

Congratulations for placing 10th in level one!