The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/11
good title; good descriptive word: Charcoal Man
Julie Andre
07/14/11
I love the line "He speaks to what you desire without caring for what you truly need." So perfect a description of the lies the Enemy feeds us. A very nice flow to this piece. Well done!
You hooked me from the beginning and held my attention. The plot development was excellent. Good job, well done.
07/17/11
I agree, Charcoal Man and The Other or just Charcoal Man would be a much better title for this AWESOME story. Wow! Please take time with your title. It's so very important.

I'll tell you a secret. Shhhh... The way I figure out a title for my stories is by going through my entry and seeing any words or phrases that I really like or that jump out at me that would fit - just like Charcoal Man - voila! Your title:)
07/21/11
CONGRATULATIONS!!