The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/11
Wow, here's another story that tugs at the heartstrings. From beginning to end you have quite the masterpiece.
06/17/11
It is really hard to make enough money to survive in this down-turned economy,especially as a single mother.

I am glad the MC was given support from her parents, which unfortunately isn't always the case.
06/20/11
I really like the way you helped us to get to know Sue by reading her thoughts.

A few apostrophe errors: outta doesn't need one at all, and for Sue's, it should be before the 's'.

Excellent title and characterization.