The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/11
This is interesting and informative. You have a good message here, one well worth heading.
06/17/11
My brother was at one time certified to be a Cessna pilot. If you loose focus of the horizon, you will get lost. In some cases, you need to trust your instruments and not your instincts. Just like you said, trust God and not in your own abilities.

Good message.
06/19/11
This is interesting information you've made into a devotional. Nice work!
06/19/11
I like this kind of devotional--it uses real-life examples to illustrate spiritual truth.

My only suggestion would be to make your to make your tone a bit more conversational and relaxed, as if you were talking to a friend, and to be sure you don't repeat yourself.

Very well done, and I like your title.
06/19/11
I thank the Lord that our checkout pilots never leaves us. I appreciate your thoughts on pride. You have a great message.
06/20/11
I agree with Jan - great info but make it feel more like a conversation. Keep writing!