The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a very well written poem in metter and lines. I think it was well constructed too. Good Job with the message as well.
06/16/11
Very well put. I like the message. Great job.
06/19/11
An encouraging poem for anyone who's feeling the pressures of the world.

You could smooth this out a bit by having a more consistent rhyme scheme, and by not ending each line with punctuation.

Good way to use the topic word.