The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/11
Beautiful descriptions of God's creation. Thank you for sharing this.
06/12/11
You paint quite a word picture. It reminds me of the sorts of articles you might read in a nature magazine.
06/13/11
It seems that you are very aware of your surroundings. You are very gifted with using word pictures.
This is a lovely piece with vivid descriptions. I liked how you merged two different definitions of outlook into your story.