The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/11
Such a healthy "outlook" on such a difficult time in American history. It hols a special lesson as we face tough times now. I thank God for your Grandma too!
Turning evil into good. Such a great 'outlook' on the Great Depression. You might want to watch your use of 'to' and 'too.' Well written, engaging to follow.
06/12/11
You create a very visible and interesting word picture of the pruning process. It's the sort of perspective that really sticks with you.
06/13/11
Your grandma was very wise. Only God can take the bad and turn it into good.

When you end a quotation with a question mark or period, you don't need to use a comma.

Well done.
Congratulations for ranking 14th in level one!
This is a great story with such an important message ESP today with so many parents giving their kids everything they want at the risk of losing their house or having to file bankruptcy. Great writing.