The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice comparisons. Alot of heartfelt thought went into this devotional lesson. Well done! I like this piece.
I really enjoyed how you shared your personal experience and then told what God taught you. Nicely done.
06/15/11
Your message is excellent. The mechanics of your writing are rough, but keep practicing. You have a great feel for a story.