The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/05
May this story open the eyes of many who need to know the truth in the God we serve. keep writing..
What a lovely re-telling of Jesus' 40 days and nights in the desert! Be careful to give each new line of dialogue a seperate line, and tighten the editing a little. Very nice - would make a lovely childrens story with illustrations! God bless.