The Official Writing Challenge
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A good attempt at past times and accents. Some editing would help the dialogue using quotation marks more clearly. The bones of the story is quite compelling. Keep writing and pursuing what God is telling you.
Absolutely delightful story. Check your editing ahead of time, but trust me, we've all made the same mistakes. In the beginning, I was so anxious to submit my stories, I didn't edit properly. You have definite talent and a flair for story telling. Keep writing. God bless!
You did a great job on this difficult topic. I felt like I was right there with the MC.
Well written thoughts, Bonnie. This was a different style of writing to me, but your words impacted my heart to the fullest.