The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/11
Apryl is a typical teenager who learned an important lesson. It was refreshing to watch her turn away from her rebellion. Nice ending.
In these hard economic times a story that is all too real but also a story of hope.
Really loved this story and was definitely looking for more to resd. Very Good
06/04/11
Apryl's dialogue was so realistic of a teen. A powerful story about the effects of the economy on many families. God bless!
06/06/11
I love rebelious teenagers as characters. Loved Apryl a lot. Your story ended too soon though. Ah well, guess I have to look forward to more of your writing then. Great Job
This is outstanding. The best thing that could happen to Apryl was for Dad to lose his jobs. Patents have raised a me generation a sense of self-entitlement. But then the father wasn't the best example. This story brought tears to my eyes as it plays out in many homes. Outstanding job!