The Official Writing Challenge
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06/02/11
This was a very interesting piece. I knew very little about Abigail before reading this story.
So Level 1 huh? Writing like this, not for long. That was a nice extension/extenuation of the story of Abigail and the formatting was pretty awesome, good job!
06/04/11
I agree with LaToya, you won't stay in Beginners for long. Great expounding on the story of Abigail! Very well written! God bless!
06/06/11
You have sold the idea of being a hidden witness to Abigail. Almost like the unseen biographer. Well done.
You packed so much on so few words. I found myself mesmerized by your words.

A small suggestion would be in a short story like this you might want to make smaller paragraphs. People are flipping through and after the title I think the number one thing that makes people stop and read is the size of the paragraphs.

You did such an outstanding job. Your words jumped off the page and it was a delight to read.
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level one! You go my friend! You are doing A great job and have been consistent in placing in the top ten of your level!