The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/11
Wow! I'll never watch that show the same again- but I WILL continue to eat my large bowl of ice cream as I watch! Nice writing and deep thinking. Thanks for sharing.
05/27/11
Great comparison! A great Coach and willingness to work toward change is what we all need...and have thanks to Jesus!
05/29/11
I like the Biggest Loser show also. I think the show also emphasizes team work.

Also, just like we need to rely on Christ's love and strength, each contestant needs to trust his or her coach to get them where he or she needs to go.
I really enjoyed your reflections on this piece. With some sprucing up a tad it'll make a devotion worthy of a devotional magazine.

Try using smaller paragraphs and when writing to view on a computer double space the paragraphs to give the reader more white space.

You took a topic so many of us can relate to and brought several good messages to the surface. Nice job.