The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice story. You did a good job of holding my attention to the end. Thanks for sharing.
You did a nice job creating an exciting story and good characters.

Remember to proof it for little things like you're vs your.

I really liked how you left it open ended because that is often how life is. Nice job.
Good story! I especially like the line "a tiny carrot in a giant beef stew." Made me chuckle! God bless!
this story feels like part of a bigger one. I am so curious :-) The ash cloud is certainly topical in the UK as we have had another scare with an icelandic volcano in the last coupe of weeks.
I like your characters and their anxieties. i am not sure how neatly it fits into the weeks theme but maybe i am missing the obvious :-)