The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/05
When you ate the jame, did you taste the goodness like God does when he knows we are walking in his will for us?(it is like goodness to Gods' ear)that kind of thin. You have something special you can expand on this story.. thanks for what you wrote!
10/18/05
Pretty good descriptive story, I think if you changed this to an active story with dialog you would find it bright and responsive.

Great analogy at the end.
Thank you for posting.
10/19/05
Wow! Nine children. My husband's grandmother had 13! It's nice that the family stayed close and shared their lives even though they were far apart in age. This is a wonderful fruit to bear also-love for one another. Thanks!
10/21/05
This is a good devotional. You wrote and described the process well.