The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/11
Moving. Thanks for sharing!
Having spent many nights in a hospital bed this story really touched me. I could feel the fear and pain and I liked the open ending. Each reader can then relate it to a story in their an life. Nicely done.
05/27/11
I am glad the MC found the peace she needed, no matter what the ending of her situation.

Well written.
05/29/11
Heartfelt, well-written, thought provoking. You won't be in Beginner for long. Great story with a powerful message. God bless!
06/02/11
gosh powerful and well written. the story unfolds and kept my attention. I would have liked to know what was a matter with the MC i fully realise that that was not the point of the story :-) the battle and the turning back to God at the moment of crisis touches many. and Fresh Hope is a perfect title.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level one!