The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/11
I feel that this is an outstanding article. I had guessed the outcome and would have been disappointed if that person was not you. Our God is an awesome God and He reigns. Praise His name.
I like the twist at the end! Good reminder!
05/23/11
well written and powerfully described and told. i love the amusing "poor fella" part. one little niggle you write in the first person but say "when I arrived at the hospital my face was a shade of morbid grey"
i am sure the MC was right but as it was first person ho could he know that unless there was a mirror