The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/11
A great way to be the correct kind of dropout. Good story.
Yes He is, always with you, ready to lead and guide and root for us through life. I'm so glad you found the best friend who not only watches us but is right with us in every situation. Thx for sharing this testimony. Praise the Lord!
05/20/11
I find it so heartwrenching when parents don't attend a child's event in school. I am so glad this child dropped out of a false sense of society and into the presence of the Lord.
05/23/11
great story....and i would have loved you to put some lines from the poem rather than just a description. weaving your story round a few lines of the poem would have added richness and helped make the short piece a little longer. keep writing and i will enjoy reading :-)