The Official Writing Challenge
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05/19/11
Hey, this was really a neat Bible study, and a lot of thought there. A great ending.
Creative way of using the theme. I like this! Thx for the clever way of unfolding Bible and Christian history. Well done!
05/21/11
i like the concept and the progression it could be a cool way of teaching and revising bible stories and church history for children.
some of the rhyming jarred a bit, it is sometimes hard to squeeze the facts into simple a 2,2 rhyme and maybe if you had used a different pattern the rhyme woulds would have been easier.
I read poetry, but just can't seem to write it, I loved yours!

The bible reminders were great, seems like there is always some way to link the Bible to current life. Thanks
05/22/11
Clever use of the theme and poem. It covered so many people in the Bible. Well done.
05/24/11
I enjoyed your different take on the theme. It would have been easy to "pigeon hole" a story given this theme. Good job for thinking outside of the box.