The Official Writing Challenge
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Hey, this was really a neat Bible study, and a lot of thought there. A great ending.
Creative way of using the theme. I like this! Thx for the clever way of unfolding Bible and Christian history. Well done!
i like the concept and the progression it could be a cool way of teaching and revising bible stories and church history for children.
some of the rhyming jarred a bit, it is sometimes hard to squeeze the facts into simple a 2,2 rhyme and maybe if you had used a different pattern the rhyme woulds would have been easier.
I read poetry, but just can't seem to write it, I loved yours!

The bible reminders were great, seems like there is always some way to link the Bible to current life. Thanks
Clever use of the theme and poem. It covered so many people in the Bible. Well done.
I enjoyed your different take on the theme. It would have been easy to "pigeon hole" a story given this theme. Good job for thinking outside of the box.