The Official Writing Challenge
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05/13/11
Praise:Great message! I like the idea of the stars twinkling as bright as they can without a care at who is looking...

Red ink: The sentence, "To simple shine our light and let the Lord use us, and at times many other stars, to create a portrait of lights across a dark world that can comfort and inspire." was a little hard to read.

Overall: Keep up the good work:)
05/15/11
This piece holds a terrific message. I especially liked the line, Even though they be far away and distant, they create light that can be felt and measured.

Keep up the great writing.
05/18/11
I just added this entry to my favorites! I love your use of the topic. The saying, "Be like the moon, reflect the Son," came to mind. It is one of my favorite sayings, even though it isn't a Bible verse. Thank you for shining! Be that city on the hill!
05/20/11
Congratulations on your 3rd place award in the Beginner's category.

Thank you for being such a shining example.