The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/11
Wow. Sounds like a traumatic experience. If this is a real story in the writer's life sounds like it didn't waver you faith. Thanks for sharing this story.
This is a great message and told in a very relatable way Nice job
05/11/11
You packed a lot into this fast-paced story. I would have been nice to slow it down a bit at spots - like the part about that male angel. Perhaps the word count got in your way.

It's a fun ride, though, with a nice message.
05/11/11
I feel stessed out too-just reading it! I liked the concept and the faith staying firm in the middle of not having any control.
I think spacing would make it an easier read, breaking up the two paragraphs. Also spending some more time on the angels would be nice too. Keep up the writing!!!
05/12/11
This was easy to relate to. It is important that we let go and let God in all situations in our life.
04/29/12
WOW! That was a real "learning experience!" Every time I've crossed over that body of water I was relieved to reach the other side! Nice story, thanks.

Wing His Words!