The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/05
I felt like I was in a bible study group LOL I need to take the information away and look it all up to see it all better... keep writing!.
I agree with Yolanda, I found this article somewhat hard going on the eyes. It would have been much better placed in the Bible Studies category of Faithwriters. God bless, love from JOHN3-34 Evangelist.
First, I want to encourge you to keep writing! Secondly, we all learn that fewer words can be much better while keeping the idea in tact. Sentences are very long. I felt like you were trying to get a message out in one breath. And as the critques previously posted--it didn't really fit the theme