The Official Writing Challenge
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This is positively beautiful you did an outstanding job drawing me in and holding my attention to the very last word. This is one of my all time favorites. I loved the fresh approach to the topic and the POV was genius.
05/11/11
Wow! What a sad but touching story. I could really feel for the poor bird, and am glad this had a happy ending.
05/13/11
great story! Good Job on placing at your level....

KEEP WRITING!