The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked all the action words. It was a poem and a story all rolled into one. I really thought it was very powerful.
Simply Incredible! I could hear the crowd. I could feel the heat and tension rising in the atmosphere like just before a thunderstorm. This is vivid reminder of His passion for the world.
I really love this piece of writing. The descriptions are so vivid and with just a few words you've captured Jesus' journey to the cross, and to our salvation. Well done!
This was intense, you captured the journey well.
great poem! congrats and it is good to see poems in the top two placings.
look forward to reading more of your entries poetic or otherwise
Congratulations! And I agree with Diana-good to see poems placing!:)