The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/11
I really liked all the action words. It was a poem and a story all rolled into one. I really thought it was very powerful.
05/09/11
Simply Incredible! I could hear the crowd. I could feel the heat and tension rising in the atmosphere like just before a thunderstorm. This is vivid reminder of His passion for the world.
05/09/11
I really love this piece of writing. The descriptions are so vivid and with just a few words you've captured Jesus' journey to the cross, and to our salvation. Well done!
This was intense, you captured the journey well.
05/12/11
great poem! congrats and it is good to see poems in the top two placings.
look forward to reading more of your entries poetic or otherwise
Congratulations! And I agree with Diana-good to see poems placing!:)