The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/11
Well now, this entry made me stop and chuckle:) I love your ending.
05/10/11
Very good lesson - I really enjoyed this read. And I agree - love the ending!
This was a fun story with endearing characters. I could easily picture the pair walking down a country road. Great message too!
05/11/11
You wove a great sermon into this story without sounding preachy. Very nicely done!
05/11/11
Your story reminded me of the song lyrics: "Slow me down, Lord; I'm going to fast. I can't see my brother, as he's walking past." Love the Old Timer's wisdom...poor cell phone guy didn't know the treasure in front of him. Enjoyed reading your story...good job and great message! :)
05/13/11
congrats on your "Highly Commended" !!!!!!!!!!

Keep Writing :)