The Official Writing Challenge
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05/08/11
Very well told. I love the way you never tell us who the narrator is, but we know right from the start.
05/09/11
Really enjoyed this. That last sentence especially grabbed me. Nicely written :)
Very very creative entry... well told - great writing. I didn't catch on right away, but once I did, again - very creative entry. Loved it!
This was was nicely done. I liked how you left little clues but they could have led to a MP or an angel. You did a really nice job on it. I really enjoyed it beginning to end. Although you mentioned the topic; it wasn't necessarily on topic but you did such a great job with the characters and the dialog I hope it doesn't affect your rankings. Again great story!
05/11/11
great story :)