The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/11
Well written story. It really used the theme for this week in a unique and powerful way. Its poignant message was creatively woven into the piece.
05/08/11
A very powerful piece. You did a wonderful job of showing us the damage, and the hope.
I really enjoyed this piece although my heart ached for the MC You did a brilliant job with the POV and showing the reader descriptive pictures. It's also a fresh take on the topic. This is one of my favorites.
05/11/11
clever :) I think it might be a winner for the original POV
05/11/11
I enjoyed how you told the story without naming the incident. You let the story fill in the details and it soon becomes clear what is being depicted. Great Job!