The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/11
I like the game theme and the tension between win/lose. I tripped of the "snare" in the second stanza but the rest flowed well.
05/05/11
I like it :) My favorite line "The truth is thus that victory
Was once for all won at the cross" Satan is playing a losing game. Thanks for that theme
05/12/11
good to see a poem in the top spot... congratulations :)
05/12/11
Cheryl, Congratulations on a well-deserved win this week!
05/13/11
Well done!You must be so thrilled:)Lovely poem! Now off to level two please:)
05/13/11
Congratulations on winning 1st!! Nice to see a good poem win every once in a while :) Once again keep up the good work :)
05/13/11
Well done poem. Congratulations on your 1st place finish.
05/13/11
Thank you all for your kind and helpful comments...this has been a very rewarding writing endeavor -- I love this community!