The Official Writing Challenge
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05/05/11
Praise:Funny the messes we find ourselves in :) This was very funny the way you explained everything. I love the bird poop covered ladder.

Red ink: Try to keep the same verb tense throughout your work.

>>Good Job on not taking the obvious meaning for blowout. Nice to read something different ;)
05/06/11
Very humorous story. I think your work could have been more readable if you had broken it into paragraphs and inserted double spacing.
05/10/11
funny story and i like your chatty style .... just like you were talking to a friend on the telephone about your story....

you added enough descriptive detail to color and enhance the telling... good one

i think you could try a more inventive title for this very funny story... this would draw people in even perhaps you could use the last line of the tale.