The Official Writing Challenge
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05/06/11
This was fun - and serious, too. Isn't that just like God to pull something like that? You told it well, and I really enjoyed it.
05/06/11
We are just along for the ride, aren't we? God has a plan that we may not always see. I enjoyed your story.
05/08/11
Awesome entry and now I'm smiling:) Certainly didn't go the way I thought it would. Very good story and your title is perfect.
05/10/11
This was a fun piece to read. I liked the jumble of thoughts going through the MC's head.
05/11/11
God has a wonderful sense of humor and great plans for us! I enjoyed your story- and how your character was given the chance to share about Jesus:) If more bosses really knew him, the world would be a nicer place!
05/12/11
Great story! I enjoyed the countdown, and the things that fear does to our minds.Keep on writing.
05/12/11
Congratulations on your 8th place ranking.Love the way you showed how quickly God is willing to move on our behalf. Loved it!!!
05/13/11
Congratulations for placing 8th in level one!